Why Scholars Don't Exclaim
What is the deal with
exclamation points and why should I think twice about using them in academic
writing?
We live in a world of excitement and emphasis. Great to see
you! Well done!
See what the insertion of an exclamation did in the two
previous sentences? It added a hint of volume, a sprig of passion. Depending on
your outlook, this insertion can be a nice method of achieving a sort of
textual breathlessness or, alternatively, it can induce in the reader a sort of
nausea.
Indeed, the exclamation point has always been controversial. Chekov, for example, wrote an entire story in which a government employee is slowly reduced to insanity by the realization that he has not used an exclamation point in 40 years of writing.
Indeed, the exclamation point has always been controversial. Chekov, for example, wrote an entire story in which a government employee is slowly reduced to insanity by the realization that he has not used an exclamation point in 40 years of writing.
But on to academic writing, where the use of this
punctuation mark is an entirely different matter. Remember in the last
paragraph when I wrote that exclamation points and their utility can vary
depending on one’s outlook? Well, APA and the scholarly audience have a very
clear outlook when it comes to exclamation marks, and the consensus is
definitely against them.
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Because an academic tone strives to maintain the impression
of objectivity, the exclamation point is considered almost entirely unwelcome
in scholarly work. For sure, a student’s evidence-based ideas may inspire
passion and excitement in the reader—but students should remember that those
ideas and words alone must do the hard work of making impressions.
In academic writing, state your claim and then defend it
with evidence. If the point you are making in your paper is that important,
trust readers to determine it for themselves.
In his role as an instructor in the Walden Writing Center, Jonah Charney-Sirott aims to "provide the type of assistance that not only can fix a sentence, but make it shine." For more punctuation pointers, see this web page.
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Great advice. Thanks for sharing.
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